What is your opinion?
Games of Aspiration
"It keeps you on your toes and wondering what is going to happen next but not able to finish the story is disappointing "
Games of aspiration
"First off this is a good book ") There can be improvement in the character (Rather than making her a first off amazing cat woman -- perhaps explain where she comes from and how she became so good in stealing) Secondly I think the plot explaining is done well (It's sometimes rather difficult to explain surroundings and explaining sometimes too much can become boring, so your explaining is good ") I think that writing the book in first person view would rather give off a more realistic play as where everything is explained for her "X to be more realistic in this book ") I would honestly like to see how this story can improve if it was written in first person and I would also like to see how the character can improve if she learned from the beginning and also to see her improve...like a said in the comments, if you want to make her more realistic, then try adding things like, she has night-vision or she can climb very well or she can shadow herself (meaning she has cat instincts or so forth) And also each chapter is different I get that but changing the story a tat into her would bring your story more alive ") it would give readers a new meaning about who and what she is and why she steals and so forth ") also explaining why she is stealing there in the first place, does she have a meaning to even be in that house or is it just a random heist?? Ask yourself these questions when you type the chapter..................."_ you have a good story here ") This is not a bad review and I really don't want to discourage you ") I like your book and I also see so much improvement in it and so much potential in it "D You are a good writer ") and remember this is just my advice towards you ") happy writing "D"
Great setup
"I think the story is quite interesting. As I was reading this, I thought this was going to be another typical heist story but it is a bit more complex. I really liked the chess angle. I also felt like the main character was a lot like catwoman. The cliff hanger was great. I felt like the chess board was intentionally laid out for her so the male voice could be someone who knows her. Very interested to see where the story goes from here."
The Queens Knight
"A very good read :)"
Interesting and kept me curious
"Though not finished found it, with all the scoundrel characters to be interesting enough I could see it as a movie. ... Keep up the good work"
