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grammar

"interesting story, the punctuation in compound complex sentences is something you should work on, as well as keeping a consistent flow throughout the chapters."

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interesting

"it was a good read but a bit jumbled so interesting though"

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Better

"It has an interesting beginning and concept, but it needs a bit of polishing."

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