Paola Vázquez Droz

Rice Lake, WI

Writer of short stories and fantasy books, Dreams of becoming one of the authors in the best selling lists.

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Creepypasta

Cool! I've never been a HUGE fan of this genre, but you have done a nice job in recreating each creepypasta character in an interesting way. I'm a horror genre fan, so you have done a good job from my perspective. Sorry that this review took a bit longer than expected.

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Nice!

Nicely written and I learned about places I had never heard of before. This story is a nicely peek into a different culture using fiction and prose.

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Amazing!

Simply and irrevocably amazing. Your writing style and the events of the story kept me hooked. I can't wait to see what happens next.

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Looking forward for more

Talented. You are so talented. I loved all of your lyrics and now you have so much more to give. I'm definitely looking forward for your next lyrics. Good luck!

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Promising

The story holds promise. The plot can be expanded and the characters can be more rounded. The setting, as well as the grammar needs help. But after editing I know it can be a more rounded, better written short story.

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Promising

The story holds great promise. There are a few grammatical errors that once fixed the story will flow even better. The plot needs a tiny little bit of work, but nothing major. Overall is a nice story to read and I'm looking forward to see where it leads.

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Fantastopia

Not a bad story. The grammar and punctuation need work and the plot a little shaping, but the story has potential. Keep up the good work!

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Potential

This story has really good potential to turn to something amazing. It still needs a lot of work in the grammar as well as in the plot. I would love to know what happens next.

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Interesting

I really liked it, but would have enjoyed it more if the plot was more extensive. But overall, really good job.

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Great!

Love it! The story is well written and the words transport me to the scene. The relationships are relatable and believable. What I enjoy the most is the involvement of the supernatural world with the modern one. This is not your typical fantasy story. Beautiful!

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Beautiful

This story is amazing. Everything is so logical and believable that I truly wish I was part of the story. It is an amazing writing.

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Better

It has an interesting beginning and concept, but it needs a bit of polishing.

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Confusing

I'm confused about the time frame of this story. Sometimes I feel that maybe the story is Medieval or Victorian, but at other times the choice of words makes me think that it is modern. The plot is an interesting one, though.

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Interesting

The story is very nicely written even if it's not done yet. The intimate scenes are well done and make the imagination fly. Overall not a bad story to explore.

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Sexy

Not bad at all, although I would have liked to see more background and description for certain characters. Still, the shots are sexy and arousing as hell.

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Terrifying

Terrifying! I never thought a baby could be so infernal. Can't wait to read what happens next and find out the reason they are both in a sewer.

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Romance

A very cute and down to earth romatic story. It is not quite finished yet, but I can tell that the end is going to be epic. Good job!

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Terrifying

Loved it. Every single minute of it. I empathized with the character and felt the apprehension of hurting an animal. The descriptions were magnificent and I felt like I did not only empathized with Dan but that I was him in the middle of a deserted road. This was just...terrifyingly amazing.

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Impressed

It is very well written and as always, I never expect the outcome. I'm looking forward to reading more stories from you. Nice job!

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Potential

Not a bad story, but it will definitely be an easier read once the grammar gets corrected. Good job!

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Not bad

Well written. Interesting plot. An easy read. Nice job!

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Werewolf

I do enjoy a well written werewolf story and this one is just that. Amazing job!

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Good

Not a bad beginning. I like how the story is moving and how there is an air of mystery around it. Nice job so far.

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Terrifying

The terror is palpable. I was at the edge of my seat the whole way. I can't believe how the story unraveled. An amazing job by an amazing author. Great job!

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Potential

She wanted wanted him after he basically assaulted her? That's how it comes across. The woman didn't know him, yet he had his way with her and treaded her as a pet. The erotic scene wasn't bad at all, but I don't know if her reciprocal action to the assault was the best play here. Besides that and the grammatical errors that make some scenes difficult to read, this story has great potential. Nice job!

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Original

I know it is a completely different story, but sure as Hell gives me Sabrina (the Netflix series) vibes. It is beautifully written and compelles the reader to know what happens next. Good job!

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Interesting

It's an interesting perspective what you claimed on the prologue. It lays the base for the rest of the story. Not a bad idea. It would definitely be a more easier read once the grammar has been edited.

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Cute

Very cute and unexpected. The grammar needs some work, though. Besides that it is an enjoyable story.

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Amazing

This story is extremely good and is not even completed yet. The writing style and plot has me at the edge of my seat. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Nice.

Not bad at all. It would have been a vit easier to read if some grammar was fixed, but vesides that was an entertaining story.

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Confusing

I don't know what to make of it. Maybe it is because the grammar needs polishing, or maybe because the topic is not fully established, I'm not sure. Maybe after the draft has been edited and the plot fully developed the story will make sense to me. Good luck!

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Inspiring

An original puzzling love story. I enjoyed each word and plot twist. Looking forward to what comes next.

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Polemic

Beautiful story but it does have a very disturbing beginning. Still, it beckons the reader yo keep at it and see where it leads. Can't wait to see what happens next!

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Romantic

What a sweet and realistic story. I enjoyed every minute of it and made me fall in love with LOVE all over again. Nice job!

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Interesting

Bloody just how I like it. The narrative style felt like a nicely written prose and kept me hooked. Overall a very good job.

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High Potential

In love. I enjoy a good written book about fantasy creatures. Can't wait to see how it all ends.

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Nice

Nicely written even if I know it is being edited at the moment. The characters are well rounded and the chapters end in a well-done cliffhanger. A good story overall. 😊

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Wolves

I enjoy you writing style. How the character speaks to the audience is something different but refreshing as well. I also love all stories that have to deal with wolves, so you won me over. Good job!

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Tribid

This is the first tribid story I have read and I must say thag I have fallen in love with it. Grammatical errors aside, you have made an amazing writing. Good job!

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Impressive

The effort you took to do your research about the 19th century slang words and how to incorporate them in the narrative is inciting. The bloody images at the beginning also pull in the reader and makes them want to know more, (they certainly worked on me). Overall a very nicely written story and I'm looking forward to seeing more of it.
Good luck!

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Beautiful

The story is amazing. It grips the reader from the start and it compels you too keep at it, to know what happens next. Wolf stories are rising in popularity and you have done wonderfully in delivering one. Good job!

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Thoughts

I feel for the protagonist. She was severely bullied in the beginning and it took great strength to overcome it. After the story is edited I know it will be even better that it already is. Good luck!

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Arousing

I really enjoyed all three stories and the bonus BDMS scene. But my favorite story was the first one. There is just something about it that really captured my interest. Good job!

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Amazing!

I know the story is not complete yet, but I just couldn't help myself. This book is just starting and it already has me wrapped around its finger. The suspense is thrillingly good and in each chapter you are left with a cliffhanger. I can't wait to keep reading more of it. The best of luck from my part. You are doing and amazing job.

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Endangered

The story has a few grammatical errors in some of the chapters. I found that the use of metaphors and imagery helps in some circumstances, but having to many too often, takes a bit of the writing away. One mistake I noticed, in the beginning, is that when the characters reached the lake, Jay smelled the salty water, but lakes are made of freshwater. It is not an important detail but is something that I noticed.
Besides that, I found this story to be different. I'm used to reading about werewolves and vampires being the good guys, when here that is not the case. Also, the protagonist has such a tragic and scarred past, that I understand the quick acceptance of this fantasy world she has been thrown into. What I did not expect were the arousing and affectionate emotions the prince brought to her because not too long ago she was being raped. That- in my opinion, it does not mean that you should change it- wasn't expected.

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Good.

A very good start. Can't wait to see what happens next.

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Exhilarating

Very nice! I enjoyed the imagery and spontaneous scenery and events. I would have liked more physical descriptions of both the protagonist of each story, but besides that, it was a very enjoyable reading.

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Good concept

The story has a good concept, but I feel that in some chapters the story turns confusing. I would have liked that the time in which it takes place would have been clearly stated in the beginning. I found that in some chapters the story gives the idea of being taken place in a medieval time, but in others I saw parallels with modern concepts. Aside from that, I think the story has great potential.

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Cultural

A very well written story. It is intriguing and exciting to see a dominance to that culture. I can't find a fault whatsoever in your writing and that makes me truly happy. Good luck in everything else.

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Potential

The story has a great potential and I am sure that when is heavily edited for grammatical mistakes it will be amazing. I can't say that I sympathize at any point with Elijah, but aside from that it is a good story.

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Not bad

The story is unique, I give you that. The grammar is good and things can be understood clearly. My advice would be to minimize the extent of the details. Adding too much physical descriptions or describing every little detail of a scene can take away the emotion for the reader. I would also like to know if what Rodney -and latter in the epilogue Caleb- could do was a sort or magical ability or simply a metaphor for the eye of the beholder. But again, it is no a bad story.

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Better

The story is much more clearer than the first draft. Even if there are still some confusing grammatical errors that hinder the reading experience, the story has a comfortable flow. There are more character descriptions and scenes clearly depicted. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Good luck!

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Promising

The story is interesting and intriguing. It has a marvelous unique touch, as I've told you before, being a wolf sotry with African American plus a Hispanic. That fact makes me enjoy it even more being a Latina myself. Furthermore, there are some minimal grammatical errors that if fixed, will make the story flow even better.
Keep up the amazing work and good luck!

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High potential

The story is amazing and this is only the beginning. The plot is developed nicely and the sotry hooks the reader on without difficulty. The are minimal grammar errors, but they don't make the reading difficult. Overall, I'm looking forward to what comes next.
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Peculiar

The story doesn't have a bad start. I would be nice though, to see more character descriptions and some background story for them. Another suggestion would be a setting description because I had a hard time imagining what was the character in. But it is not a bad story since it is only beginning.

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Very good

The story is thrillingly good and I can't wait to keep reading more of it.
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Surprised

This story was a huge surprise to me. I really didn't expect to be reading a guy-on-guy book. I've always preferred lesbian erotica (even if I'm not a lesbian). But I can say that I really enjoyed the few erotica scenes in the book.
Also, I never would had imagined that there was going to be incest. Yes, the blurb said about it, but I never expected it. The incest was midly disturbing, but it gave the story a twist all in itself.
It is not heavily baldly written, but there are some grammatical errors that once fixed it will make the reading a lot easier.
Overall, I actually enjoyed the story and can't wait to read more from you.
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Entertaining

The second story is amazing. It picks up well where the first ended and keeps the reader engaged. I hope that you will update soon.

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Interesting

I really like the story so far. It is a great mixture of action and fantasy. I'm really looking forward what comes next.

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Potential

I like the story so far, there are a few grammatical errors but they can be fixed easily. What has me confused is the fact that you mention a pack, but don't mention any wolves. It has me intrigued to know what happens next.

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Potential

This story has potential. Some parts read as they come from a videogame but is not that bad. the grammar needs a bit of help as well ad the development of the plot. Still, I feel like this can be made into a great story.

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Needs work

There is not a clear plot to this story. I don't even know if it should be called a story. It feels like it is more a diary, a journal than a fictional or non fiction book/short story. Still, I think with a little work and better grammar this prose can become something interesting. ☺️

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Good start

The book has a pretty good start, but the writing needs a bit of work. Keep it up though 👌

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Rare

The story has a good plot so far. I'm eager to know where it leads. The writing could use some work, but is very minimal. Best of luck!

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Amazing!

I love every single story you write. You're a great writer. Love it!!!

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Amazing

It's truly magical. I just wish I had half the talent you have. Live it!

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Thoughts

This was not what I expected when I read the title. It is very different from other writings I've read where there's a Master and Submissive. Still, I find myself enjoying the story.

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Creepypasta

I'm liking the story, but is different. The writer is always speaking to the audience, the character seems to know that he has an audience.

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