What is your opinion?
Love Hatred
"The story is keeping me on Edge, nice story, wanna see what would be the shock or reaction of Graham and Sarah when they come face to face"
Good
"Spelling mistakes, but good story"
I love the way story is heading
"The starting is very consuming and i like the character."
Has me hooked
"Really enjoying this plot so far."
Love Hatred by Beauty
"I Like the storyline. I don't recommend any novels as I don't interact with any other readers."
I LOVE THIS!!
"This has a really good plot!! The writing can be improved but this is good 3o4k..,Hope this book gets more attention!!"
Very interesting!
"Update new chapter!!! Please"
Good
"Enjoyable book "
Love hatred
"Nice past time "
Good work!
"Let's start with what I loved in this story -1) the connection between Ryan and Sarah was so heart warming and pure that I couldn't help but say- AWWW!!how cute. 2) The way you use diction and portray their emotions, woW! The descriptions were so perfect, that readers can vividly imagine the scenes. 3) The DIALOGUES seemed real and believable, and this is a great achievement for any authors. Great work! What you can improve- Use Grammarly to edit and minimize grammar issues, although there were only a small amount of mistakes, but you might want to bring perfection in your stories. 2) It is good to change POVs, but it is not a wise idea to do it so frequently that readers get confused. I hope you understand what I mean. Overall, I loved the plot of your story. Keep writing, read other's story to help you improve more. Good work! Have a happy writing."
Love Hatred
"I like the story. The writing style can be improved more. Overall I enjoy it and hope to like to more. Nice plot. "
Enter the den
"Omg.... She is entering lions den"
Yrs
"I liked its plot. But the writing style is bit confusing "
