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Love it!

"I’m loving this book so far! It’s got such a fun tone and the main character is adorable. The side characters are also realistic. Since I’m a sucker for a good teenage romance and love triangle I’m totally hooked and would definitely recommend to my friends or anyone looking for a light and humorous romance. A couple small grammar issues, but I can’t wait to see where it goes! More Issac and Harrison please! "

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Suspension is killing me!!!

"I love this story because it's interesting and always keeps the reader on the edge of their seat. I'm dazzled at how you describe Montana's emotions, and how she's torn between the two boys. I love how you describe the characters and make them sound so vibrant an interesting and developed. I also think it's crazy how you manage to bring out some of the details about people she admires in a good way, but when the mood shifts it can be used against them when describing the people. The only thing I don't love about this story is some of the grammatical errors. On a few occasions I've been confused because of two sentences bleeding together or some spelling errors. So I can't really rate five stars on that. Then again, when can you on Inkitt? Nevertheless I'm recommending this to all my friends and followers and I can't wait to see what you do next! (P.S, I'm thinking she's gonna meet Isaac in the mall while she goes with Harrison)"

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