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the cave

"i just don't know what to say. it seems that each one of your stories is better than the last. this was definitely a 4 shot bourban story, lol. i did however find more typos in the story, but not enough to slow me down. with limited characters and dialog later in the story it carried its own very well. i love your descriptive skills, it has my skin crawling. this is definitely a must read for horror buffs across the board. thank you for sharing."

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five stars<3

"even tho i HATE spiders, i loved this story so much. i really thought either Tom was gonna die or Alex. But neither of them did, this was a really good story. i think it's kinda connects with the story where a family went to a old house with the same spiders..but hey, i might be wrong."

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Tha Cave

"This book kept me on the edge of my seat lol I hate spiders but loved this book wouldn't want it to be me in there spiders yuck "

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The Cave

"I can't stand spiders but this is absolutely fantastic. I can't wait to see what happens. I hope he finds Alex."

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Creepy

"I despise spiders. this story was well written. I enjoy it tremendously. I was on edge the entire time that I was reading in fear of these nasty creatures and hoping that neither him or his son ended up as a statistic. It was well written and you could see and feel and smell the cave. You can picture the nasty spiders and their slimy red water. I loved all of this. I think the ending was a bit abrupt but hopefully this was a second tale could be told of this horrendous out break of spiders. Great Job."

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Excellent!

"-I literally loved the writing style of the author. -Would surely recommend this book to frens, etc. "

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The Cave

"Great story, very well done the characters, the writing, plot. I enjoyed it immensely I will tell my friends and family. I hope to read more from you. "

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The Cave

"Wow!! So very well written. Intense and exciting!!"

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Love It❤️

"The storyline is wonderful and suspense is right on point. I love it"

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Fast-paced read👍

"Great plot premise. The author makes a good build-up to an exciting climax while maintaining a good creep factor. The draft could benefit from a few good edits, but the bones of a great story are there. Well done!"

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