Inkitt
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Absolutely amazing. I loved the style. Personally I hate reading and books and this was genuinely amazing to read. Anyone who loves anticipation woudl love this

"I liked the style and it had just enough horror to be chilling. Personally not a reader type but this was amazing"

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I rate this novel five stars so far, the plot is excellent. The author's writing style is too easy to be understand. It made me read continuously. I have really enjoyed reading this book

"I rate this novel five stars so far, the plot is excellent. The author's writing style is too easy to be understand. It made me read continuously. I have really enjoyed reading this book. "

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Perfect October Read

"The way the tension builds in the first half and stays all the way to the end is great. I was never 100 percent certain that the main character was safe - it made me eager to read on to find out what happens."

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Gripped me from the start

"I'm really enjoying this novel. It's exactly what I normally read. Well written and the story doesn't take too long to kick in which is brilliant. I had a whole visual from start to finish and can't get it out of my head!!"

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Horror

"This book was great. Suburb. written,I enjoyed this book in great detail. I recommend this book highly appreciated. "

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What a fantastic story !!

"It was so gripping!!! I couldn't stop reading until I finished it🔥🔥 Amazing story, Fantastic one😍"

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Great one

"I really did enjoy reading this novel, tho i finished in 5 days was very amazing"

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That was great

"It was very interesting. I hope I can find another books to read with this intense "

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What Scares Me

"This mystery keeps you on the edge of your seat through out. Happy reading🌹"

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Good story and write up it sounds real but scare

"Nothing particularly just wanted something away from romantic one"

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What scares me

"Enjoyed this book. Well written. Good storyline. Effective narrative. "

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READ IT AND READ IT AGAIN IN 4 MONTHS

"I loved how the author properly built up the suspense, I tend to not read a lot of books like this because they lack that element. I would recommend this book to anyone that’s a fan of suspense, especially because I know a lot of ppl personally that don’t like full-on supernatural stuff, this was just amazing. 1000/10"

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Horror😨

"We want more of these books it made me scared 😨"

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Genuinely unnerving

"I love how you took your time setting up the character and her fears, and kept us guessing all along. The part where she's going down to the basement is really freaky, and I love how you describe it as a "black void"; really helps you visualize the scene from the main characters eyes. That moment later with the basement door being found open was freaky, too. You wrote the settings and character actions very well; I could feel myself going through the same steps. I was legitimately scared something was going to jump out and attack her any minute! But it's really cool and unique how you kept invoking the fear of the unknown instead. I'll be sure to check out some of your other work"

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My review

"This story was too scary,,,,O My God!! I just found myself hooked to reading this interesting book. The main character and the plot have been able to portray a clear image making the story seem more imagery. WOW!!"

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"Very amazing story loved it great plot 😀🌹"

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Mummy

"It’s gripping"

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"Excellent. I didn't want the story to end"

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What scares me

"Omg this story was awesome I was Hooked reading it i was scared Tooooo !!! Hopefully You will write more mysteries !!! Loved it Thank you"

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What scares me

"Very good book. I wish we would have found out more about what Natalie and her husband did after finding out. And what happened to the man in the lake. But good regardless "

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