What is your opinion?
Good Job
"I like that you made Katniss pretty true to character. Though I feel like she'd be a little more rebellious than to actually do whatever Snow says."
Great Story
"Your story is so touching. I almost cried as well when Peeta dies.😥 The plot is very interesting. You have a few spelling mistakes but other than that, you story is great Don't stop writing!!"
abby
"LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
Great story!
"I really liked this story It was really good. But, there were some grammar and spelling mistakes that made some parts a little confusing. Overall it was really good I wish it was longer and I would love to read more from you."
I want to read more!
"This about broke my Everlark shipper heart, but you've definitely got me hooked. I want to read more, and now! You did a nice job of weaving text from the second arena into your opening. A very interesting story. I hope you plan to continue it."
The potentials all there.
"Hey thought I'd weigh in. Fairly good grammar and spelling, although I noticed a few slips, though there was one section when a whole bunch of speech got glued together even as they were alternating people so just need to drop a few lines. Perhaps you should break up the different moments in your chapter by making a line of - or doing a ... to make sure the events remain separate. I think you need to take some time to show the emotions rather than just telling them. But I am really interested in the concept of the story, I really think you could have something interesting going here. So keep up the good work, let's see how far you can come!"
Sugar cubes and fire
"I don't even know what to write. Even though it is considered complete, it obviously isn't. I didn't really think of anything while reading this. It's almost as if you showed me a blank screen. Decent idea, but the execution wasn't very good."
