Chapter 1:Pilot | In Loving Memory by Mun Eunji at Inkitt
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In loving memory

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Summary

Why is everyone leaving me? What'd I do to deserve this Why can't I be happy? Someone tell me before I go insane!!! Anya Max-Thurman had suffered tragedy to tragedy, she was so hurt that it didnt even bother her anymore One day she made a wrong turn on her way to school and encountered a house, and the moment she stepped in... Her entire life changed

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
4
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
16+

1:Pilot

...What is it?...

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"What is what?-"

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...YOU KNOW WHAT I'M TALKING ABOUT!!...

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...WHY ARE YOU SO HAPPY?!!...

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"I-...You're insane..."

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...Won't talk?...You're just like the rest of them...

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*Click*

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"Wait...n-no! NO-"

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*BOOM*

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'It's not fair... how come everyone gets to be happy,except me?...' I think as I shower to freshen up for the day ahead of me. I could tell today would be no different from every other day...sh*tty.

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As I step out of the shower, I wrap my towel around my body and travel to the mirror

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"Is it because I'm not pretty?" I ask myself, I stare at my caramel colored skin, its hiding nothing but bones...I look anorexic...

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The dark circles surrounding my dark brown eyes look like black holes that could suck anything out of existence... I haven't slept in days.

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I disregard the thoughts as I slip on my school uniform, consisting of a red skirt, black shirt, red blazer, black Knee-high socks and black flats. I was very uncomfortable with the length of my skirt, it ended mid thigh.

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I walked out and descended the staircase not too far from my bathroom, My mom was waiting for me in the kitchen.

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"Good morning Anya, how'd you sleep sweetheart?" She asks me in a welcoming tone, I hesitated

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"Fine...and you?" I said while laying my head in my the crook of my elbow on the kitchen counter,

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"You didnt sleep did you?.."She asks, I shake my head, no, "Anya Freddie-Charles Max-Thurman...."When she says my full government name, I know I've done something wrong.

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"You can crusify me later mom, I gotta get to school" I stand up and walk through my front door without another word.

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As I'm walking, I pull out my phone to listen to music on the way, but I see a message. From my snapchat.

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When I open the message, I see it's from my boyfriend.

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Myles:Hey babe...how are you feeling?

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Me: I'm all good, nothing to worry about

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Myles: You sure, I haven't seen you alot in the past month

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Me: Um...yeah I've been sick alot, my phones about to die, I'll text you when I get to school.

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Myles:Um... k then, see you later love

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I turn off my phone and tightly hold it in my hand as I turn on my depressing music. The past month has not been alright,

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My father Charles Max-Thurman was a famous rapper back in the 90's, he was still very famous these days, he was shot after a drug deal went wrong. He died the minute me and mom arrived at the hospital, we only had time to say one goodbye, nothing else.

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It messed me and mom up real bad, after we found out why...I hurt alot, but I guess that's just part of life, everyone has secrets, even when they dont know it.

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Anyway, as I continued my way to school, I walk past an old looking house that I'd never really seen before. Did I take a wrong turn?

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I look around and see I'm on the wrong street....

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Damn it...I'm gonna be late for school

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I look behind me ,but then turn my attention back to the old looking house, "it's a bit cold, and I dont think anyone's in there...hm...I'll go in." I think to myself. My feet begin to move towards the house without my permission, it's as if they had a mind of their own.

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Once I reached the front porch of the house, my hand raised to the ragged door knob, it was cold and looked like it'd fall off any moment

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As I twist the door and push the door open, I feel a hard gust of wind crawl against my skin, goosebumps begin to pop up like weasels.

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My feet begin to move once again, I'm begin to shiver, it's pretty cold. My eyes travel around the living room and I notice a huge chandelier hanging from the unreachable ceiling of the two story building, I start to get dizzy the longer I stare up at the ceiling

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When I lower my head top continue to walk, I feel another gust of wind crawl across my ear.

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...hello sweetheart...

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My body freezes, I don't even bother to jump, "What? Who's there?" I ask, while shaking uncontrollably,

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...you may not know me, but I know you, Anya Freddie-Charles Max-Thurman...

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"What do you want?, how do you know who I am?...that's a bit creepy, are you a pedo?"

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P-pedo? What? No...I'm your new sorce of happiness Anya...you've always wanted to feel happy, am I correct?...

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"Yes...but are you good or evil, and I wanna see who you are" i say as the trembling begins to slow down, I would've thought this voice was in my head and that I was just imagining things

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But I just had a whole conversation with a some I think supernatural-pedo-man...

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Out of the corner of my eye, I see a tall figure step out of the shadows, my neck almost snaps with how quick i turn it

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He walks up to me slowly, I can't speak, I'm petrified. I look at his face,

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And he's fuckin handsome

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His hair is black and dark blueish, long enough to be put in a pony tail, parted in the middle, he's wearing a white button up shirt with black pants. To of his button loose. His eyes are bright blue. His figure is very muscular, I gawk at the sight of this beautiful man in front of me.

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"Hello Anya...by the look on your face, I can tell that you like what you see" he says giving me a sensual smirk, my heart beat speeds up.

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...god damn...

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"U-uh, no, now answer my question, are you a good person or evil?" I say stuttering, he puts his firm hand on my shoulder, "I'm whatever you want me to be Babe" he chuckles with that same sensual smirk on his face

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My eyes go wide at the nickname, "Babe?, um, I have a boyfriend... and isnt it a bit too early for you to be giving me a nickname?, I don't even know your name..." I explain

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He suddenly blushes, "What's wrong,? Do you not want me to know your name" I ask, he sighs " I go by Nelo" he says in short, I can tell that's not his real name, but I go with it.

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"Okay then...Nelo...um, so what do you want with me sir" I ask, he takes my hand, his hand is cold, "close you eyes honey" he says in a low voice, my heart jumps but I close my eyes, about five seconds later, I feel a sharp pain across the palm of my hand, I almost scream but I bit my lip to hold it in

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Soon the pain lessens and I feel his hand on top of mine, "w-what did you do?" I ask while shivering once again, my eyes are still closed, but I begin crying from fear, "Shh, it's okay sweetheart, this is only gonna hurt for a little bit, and it's just a tiny little pinch okay?" He explains in a soft voice, I nod, but coninue to cry silently.

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About five seconds later, I begin to feel dizzy, I could barely stand up straight, "N-nelo... what g-going on?, I can dont feel well," I say as I feel myself fall back, then everything stops... I dont feel the pain anymore, I cant see anything, and my eyes won't open.

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Ugh...I passed out. What did he do to me?

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