What is your opinion?
It was great
"I enjoyed reading this and will read this writer again "
The Counting Game
"I like the book... but is it based on true events??? actually im from Fiji... and this book is just WHOA... i really wanted to know who 'HEY' is!... like seriously! 🇫🇯❤"
Very intriguing
"You are a great writer ..the story had me fro the start."
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Counting
"Absolutely loved reading this couldn't put it down until I finished. Will definitely recommend this to others."
Loved it!
"Seriously well done"
Review
"I think overall this was a great story and very well thought out. I love how you portrayed the main character and the sexual tension that is built between her and "Hey." There were times where I felt the story shifted a little bit, especially in some of the areas where you bounced back and forth between her thoughts and the main storyline. There were a few grammatical errors but not enough to leave the reader uninterested. I loved your style of writing, especially for this erotica-themed short story. As an erotica writer myself, I find it can be difficult sometimes to keep the reader engaged throughout the story without being redundant and repetitive with the sexual scenarios but you did an overall great job! Keep writing!"
Short and chock full of sexual tension
"Succinct, this story allowed me to feel as if I understood our main character well despite the short number of pages. It also carried some steamy sexual tension throughout."
Okay. Good but needed more.
"Needed more. Don’t feel that it was finished."
Not my cup of tea.
"I felt no connection with the main character. What's her name? What is she like, as a person? Apart from the fact that she is always horny, always fingering herself what is it about her that should make me feel her emotions? There is absolutely no story. Mindless sex. And those parts aren't good either. I would not recommend this book. "
