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"I must say as a reader this book is really interesting.Overall it's smooth sailing, and I like how detailed it is. There's some part on some chapters that I don't know if it the twin or the sister or Brian. My critique: Please write using ” and ” in a dialogue that's all. My review is always as a reader never did I reviewed as a writer because I believe readers are the one who will give you the most honest critique and by following some good suggestion you will learn and come up with a better story next time you write. Overall I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing your talent🙏"

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Another great story

"Lovely story, another one that I have also enjoyed so much. Thank you very much for posting all these great tales!"

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Another Good read

"I've read other Work by Ms. Abbot...and this one is close to being on par with her other stories. I wish it would of been a tad longer so the character developed could have been expanded some. But for a short story it was good. There is a touch of Brian De Palma (misspelled) Femme fatal to it. If you want something light with a twist with some humor tossed in it, then give this one a try. "

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Reception Games

"Honest, I wasn't sure what to expect from the story and it took me quite sometime to read. But I think it was humorous, it seems english, though most phrases reminds me more of Irish (ain't a good judge of countries), but I did enjoy it. Apart from the slight confusion with who spoke, the story was well written.✨✨✨"

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