What is your opinion?
GANGSTA
"The introduction from the main character Ruby, is unique from other stories I've read before. It's funny and the author did really good on the introduction because it's really interesting and want the reader to keep on reading."
Gangsta
"This looks promising! The plot and overall idea are unique and fresh. Ruby, the protagonist, is full of personality - same with the side characters. I'm very interested to see how the plot plays out. As far as critique and suggestions go, I would have liked the characters and plot to have been introduced a bit more naturally. Maybe try to use the "show, don't tell" method? Also, it would have been interesting to learn about the world this story takes place in - however, with it being so early in the story, this issue will probably fix itself as the plot goes on.. Lots of potential! I'm very curious to see what happens next."
