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A Clear, Concise and Solid Start.

"Review based on Chapters 1-3. Stewart uses a clear and concise writing style and their sentence lengths are varied, which is a welcome relief. There were one or two paragraphs that were a bit long (e.g. a 28-line paragraph in the middle of chapter 1 and two 22-line paragraphs in chapter 3) but the vast majority were good lengths. Interesting developments in the plot, characters and worldbuilding. Stewart has a nice foundation to build upon in their later chapters, which I very much look forward to! Overall a fantastic start."

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Fluid

"Engaging writing style with no noticeable errors! I can tell you have been writing for a long time. I enjoyed the fluidity of the writing and how it was easy to understand the unique terms that you were presenting without need for over-explanation. You were able to portray the main characters personality and traits in only one chapter which is testimony to your great writing style."

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