What is your opinion?
Greeting
"Hi Author, I just finished reading your story today, and I really enjoyed it! Please keep creating more—Your work is truly inspiring, and I believe one day you’ll become a very well-known and great writer."
Awesome!
"It's awesome but the sad part at the end made me cry! "
Wonderful
"As I believe I mentioned before I have almost no knowledge of Naruto, having only seen a handful of episodes a long time ago. As such, I judged this story on it’s own merit and as an original fiction. First chapter was very captivating. First person stories are made or broken by the narrators ability to create a voice for the main character that is likable and compelling and you seem to have done that. You really captured the felling of confusion. I was a very big fan of the casual reveal of ninjas and the simplified Chakra explanation. The development of the relationship between Quorra and Kakashi felt very natural, progressing from confusion and suspicion to curiosity to respect and trust. I especially liked chapter 14, where they are walking together in the rain, even if he had to ruin the moment. So as not to spoil any future readers of this review, I will say that the final chapter with Leda was extremely well done. You did a good job conveying the emotions that Quorra felt. A few small changes in tenses from time to time, but those weren’t too prevalent and didn’t break the flow of the story all that much. A small amount of editing and you could nab all of them. I do wish I could offer more to improve the story, but in terms of technical writing skills I believe it is solid. Most of the dialogue felt natural and scenes flowed well from one to another. Best of luck in the contest and you have more than earned a vote from me."
