Welcoming
I trudged gloomily through the street slick with mud and hail.i’ve finally reached my step-sisters house. I rapped on the door three times awaiting her answer. Finally she rushed out hugging me and enveloping me in feathers and fur. “I can’t breath” I muffled into a feather boa. “Oh sorry Jade, it’s just we haven’t seen each over in a few years” she replied “more like two months” I replied. “It’s rather late, how about I show you your sleeping quarters for this visit” she said “why thank you Audrey that would be lovely”. I replied while leaving a trail of mud in each footstep.
It's off to a interesting start, love!
I will read it and tell you what I think about it so far