What is your opinion?
Wynd Academy
"Great story. Enjoyed it from beginning to end. Can’t wait to read the next one. "
Good story.
"The story is very good, with some amazing plot twists. It needs some editing in some words. Too many wrongly placed virgules instead of dots, to end a sentence. I had to read a full paragraph more than once, to understand when a particular sentence ended."
Good so far
"Its a little confusing here and there and has quite a few grammar errors but otherwise so far so good "
A promising start.
"The plot is gripping and intriguing and the worldbuilding is done well. It's obvious Dunn has put a lot of thought and care into it. Some of the aspects could be revealed a bit slower to increase the mystery, but this is an easy fix if the pacing is slowed. The story as a whole could be improved with a slower pace and fewer narrators. This would allow Dunn to really focus on really developing out the protagonist and her allies because, at the moment, the story seems too 'busy' so it's hard to attach to the characters. Dunn could also work on showing not telling when introducing new characters. So instead of telling the reader, "We met Dexter/ Victoria this way..." the story would benefit if you show them meeting Dexter/Victoria. The chapters are updated very regularly, which is a really nice touch! You won't be left waiting for too long to receive a new update. Each chapter is also a good length for Inkitt, so the story is very easy to get into. Overall, a promising start! A few rounds of edits to slow the pacing and work in showing not telling and 'WYND Academy' has the potential to become a real gem."
Alright
"The book was okay. Had decent action, tension and plot. However, there were several obscure moments where I didn't know what was going on...others were I felt the chapters were rushed or too short."
