What is your opinion?
Book
"Great book! Can't wait for updates!!!"
Interesting so far
"Very interesting storyline. I can’t wait for more updates as I want to know in what direction the story is going."
Amazing
"I abso-fucking-lutely loved it. What a marvelous storyline. "
Pulls you in, but....
"The story really pulls you in, but....your grammar is atrocious. I know this isn't your first book, so you should know better. You've been called out on it before. Do you not care? Get yourself a good editor or proof reader, I'm sure it would help you immensely. Like I said, your story is great, but the spelling errors alone are killing me."
Okay okay
"Not sure of it .. but reading this make me feel dedicated to read next chapter of it ... 🤨🤨"
Incredibly Ableist
"I read the CONCEPT of this story and had issues. "Mentally ill, obsessed, and bloodthirsty." Really? REALLY!? Does the author not realize how ableist it is to have their villain's DEFINING TRAIT be "mentally ill"? This is the kind of thing that adds to the stigma around mental health issues and perpetuates awful, cruel stereotypes. It's plenty possible to have a villain with mental illness. There are lots of ways to write them where the WHOLE REASON why they're evil isn't that illness. And that's not what's happening here. From what I read, this story is full of countless stereotypes and misconceptions and operates around the idea that there's something "wrong" with people who are mentally ill. Treating them like freaks instead of people with illnesses. This is pure ableist nonsense and I'm disgusted to see it on the site. I'm going to suggest to the author to SERIOUSLY do some research next time, and don't fall into the trap of using nothing but stereotypes as a crutch for your story. You can do better. Your ideas aren't bad, but using mental illness as the root and cause of all of your characters' problems and all of the evil in the story isn't okay."
Grammatical Errors
"Where is the plot in the story? And so many grammatical mistakes wow! You need to learn how to write first and then attempt to come on such platform. Please don’t read and waste your time by reading this! "
