What is your opinion?
Different and interesting
"I like this book. It is different and interesting. The story itself is great because its a quest, it could go on for however long you want it to and it wouldn't get boring. It has tons of references and connction to fanasty games like dungeons and dragons. If you don't understand that kind of stuff, the author explains it really well so that you can still enjoy the book. Its something i wouldn't find my reading and liking but i did and i can't wait to see what happens next. The only problem i saw were gammer mistakes and the odd why of showing who was taking without any " ". But i still like it, keep doing with your doing!"
Good
"Unlike my MC, your MC seems quite nice, Krush. This story has a good plot, and has potential in it. Make the chapters shorter, and keep cliffhangers. Those keep the reader on their toes. Good Luck!"
