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perfect

"I enjoyed this story because of how I can imagine everything, the cliché parts were click for me as I love them and it wasn't over road too. I also like how the characters were in grey shades and the changes in emotions were described superbly. I loved it. "

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Mythwield

"I am not usually the type of person to read about fictional characters like werewolves and such but the concept of the story is new and intriguing. Though sometimes it was hard to keep up with the English so I suggest you just go over the paragraphs one more time to fix the grammar mistakes here and there but overall, I loved the story. "

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Complex!

"Quite honestly, the genre of fantasy is a little out of my comfort zone, but I decided to give this story a go and well, it was definitely complex and mind-boggling, even creepy at times. The word imagery used in chapters one through three where especially eye-catching to me. Also some parts were very cringe-worthy. In nutshell, this book definitely paints a vivid picture of the fantasy world and avid fantasy readers should enjoy this. Great creation!"

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Good concept

"The author has created an interesting story concept. The writing style has its strong qualities, but stumbles in its weak control of the English language. Homonym/ homophone confusion ( feats for feet, for example). Partial clauses and awkward sentence structures. With a rewrite, this could be a great story. "

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Interesting but hard to read

"The plot of this story is interesting, if you are able to understand the writing. It is necessary to reread paragraphs because of the run on sentences and grammar mistakes. However, the story itself does seem to be interesting."

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