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A Fantastic Start!
"Characters are delved into nearly immediately (good job), and the reader jumps into the scenes immediately (also awesome!). Characters have distinct personality. Excellent dialogue, and plot, too. Watch out for errors, though: grammar, syntax, etc. Overall, I've enjoyed reading thus far!"
Brilliant.
"This is wonderfully suspenseful and darkly humorous. Your characters are complex and nuanced and I can't wait to read more of this story. You are a brilliant writer. :)"
