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DA BEST!!!!;

"This book is so great. I love the authors style of writing and the punctuation, spelling and grammar is great. This is as good as Warrior Cats!"

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:) great book

"I really like the book, it is written so well and it seems that it doesn't miss a bit of detail."

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"This book is very decent and I look forward to more in the future. Every word is said in a descriptive manner and you can possibly determine how things feel, look, and sound like in the story. 5 stars!"

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Awsome!

"I LOVED IT! Its a shame it hasnt goten to chapter 3 yet! Im just practicly jumpimg out of bed every morning to see if the next chapters have been submitted! Please continue this story i really want to know how it ends!!! "

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I love it, hands down.

"I love it! Don’t mind the four stars, I’m picky when it comes to reading. You use lots of details and proper punctuation and capitalization. The plot is interesting and keeps readers wanting more from it, which is exactly what you want. I love third person limited, so the writing style is on my good side lol. The best thing about it is that it reminded me why I love warrior cats so much since it’s been a while since I read it. Overall I can see the effort put into it and I enjoy reading it and am looking forward to seeing where the characters take us :D"

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