Curses!

"Curses, this is good! I loved the quick read it made me want to watch Ever After High - as I didn't even know of its existence! I like the fact that you made sure that Milton's guilt is intertwined from the start to ending of this one shot story. I could not find any flaw in it; grammar or otherwise. This makes it a sure 'easy to follow' story and the flow of it is balanced just write! Though I'd almost want the A/N to be out of the way - Never a fan of reading those! My own opinion, though. Great job!"