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Mysterious

"Your writing is very mysterious and suspenseful. He keeps me guessing as to what will happen next. I hope you update soon. Thank you for sharing your wedding."

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Good

"Wen is next chapter coming? "

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the lost hairs

"Recommended for teenagers and above. Good writing skills and happy to read a book with a good vocabulary and free of grammatical mistakes "

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Be. A. U. Ti. Ful.

"This is one of the most sophisticated reads I've come across, I can't wait to see what she's building upa and when and how it will all come to an end "

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Detailed and descriptive

"I am absolutely loving this story. There is so much detail and description in each chapter. The sibling characters are fairly realistic. I feel like there is more to the youngest. I am truly looking forward to the plot twist coming out."

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The lost heirs

"Story is quite entertaining , spooky as well as light heartedly moving with good pace An ement of suspense is there "

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The Lost Heirs

"Just starting out this story and I can already tell it's going to be 🔥 🔥. The grammar is top notch and the author has a way with their words, that of keeps one glued to the story. Can't wait to read the rest of the story. Am giving it a perfect score."

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The Lost Heirs

"Such a relief from the constant flood of poorly written teen supernatural stories. This novel is class, elegance, mystery, romance, and adventure all in one so far, proper grammar as the cherry on top! Sincere gratitude to this author. 🙏"

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The Lost Heirs

"It is so intriguing story. The author has put so much effort to ensure every single scene is explained in depth. The suspense, conspiracies and thrill are the main ingredients of this novel. Look forward to read more!"

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You did a rewrite of this story I read the original and liked it. I like the rewrite better a lot more detail and more people and back story love it so far

"I love the mystery of the disappearance of the town’s children. I wonder who is behind it all and why the Apion’s don’t go in the sunlight. They are totally covered up what scars are they hiding"

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It's a very interesting story and I also like the writer's use of suspense in the book

"I recommend this book, it's very interesting and I love the way the writer uses good language and writing skills "

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I am hooked!!

"This story kind of started out confusing but now it's getting pretty interested and can't wait for the next chapters."

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Lost heir

"Thanks for update"

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The lost heirs

"Intriguing .. every chapter will capture your attention and you will want to keep on reading . Overall plot of the novel is also refreshing and new.. i can't wait to read more 😍"

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Lost Heirs

"Very intriguing storyline. Wish there was a little more back story about the siblings, their mom, and how they are related to the Aprions. Overall, very good book. "

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This is very interesting book.

"The story line is very good and the characters are interesting. It's well written so it's obvious that the author has very good writing skills. I highly recommend it to anyone else. "

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Lost heirs

"I liked everything about this book the thrill and the hunger to know more that the children had"

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Lovely

"I love it! It has a solid plot, it's really captivating, and it's filled with mystery. You are gifted. I just wish I could read more of the book. I don't know you're deliberately not sharing anymore of its chapters or that you've just not had the time to finish the book. So, so far so good👍"

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The lost heir

"Love it so much. Thanks "

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Very well written

"This story, although unfinished, was very well written. The author's style, as well as the interesting plot, really drew me in. I hope you update soon! Keep up the good work!"

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