What is your opinion?
Classic Genre, lots to come
"Hi There, I love end of the world type books. The passage, the stand etc. so have a huge soft spot for these stories. If I am honest there is not enough here for me to judge correctly I feel like I need more, I need the story to unfold and the pain to begin so that I can see where the story is heading."
Emergence: New world
"Great story so far, I can’t wait for more. Writing style is descriptive and very clear. Smooth read and I enjoyed the characters and well done in the dialogue. I would have liked to know an little more about the surroundings and a clear picture of setting. Really good , I enjoyed !"
Good in every aspect
"I was pretty impressed with this so far. I like where the story takes place and the ideas giving it a more unique survival story other then your typical zombie or crashing in a middle of a forest like novel. I love how all the characters have their own unique personalities making them feel real although with that said I wish we had more back story on his sister Mellany and the other characters. It's descriptive enough but I feel like maybe writing what the surroundings look like more and how it effects Matt around him would make it better. Another subject i like about the novel is its not hard to understand and cuts to the point of why they are there. I also really enjoy the title making it stick out more then the other novels. With this plot I could see this being a very successful story creating a harsh challenge for Matt, his family and friends around him. You have a great setting and characters i like so far, but making it more descriptive on the setting around him and having a bit more of back story I feel like could make this better. Even adding what the color of things are, how they feel, or how the forest look around Matt would make a huge improvement in the story."
