A start of A flashback
In the year 1030 after the great separation of continents, a young man called Gabrel started his journey to reach his goal, he was waiting at a seaport in one of the 4 elemental continents, the water continent.
Gabrel waited for his companion to tell him the ship being ready or not, the young man was looking at the sky on the warm days of summer, counting clouds while recalling the past
5 years ago when he lost his home, his family, and everything he ever cared about, and while he was staring, his companion came and started to call his name.
โRel.โ
But he wasnโt listening, lost in the sea of thoughts.
โHey, Rel.โ
Gabrelโs companionโs face started to turn red, her eyebrows went down and her teeth were clinching because of his attitude.
โHEY, REL, CAN YOU FOCUS ALREADY?โ
โW-what?โ
โThe ship is ready to leave now, itโs the time to move and youโre staring at the sky, wasting our time.โ
โOh, sorry, I just was thinking about something.โ
โYou can think later, okay? We have a mission to accomplish.โ
โSure.โ
Gabrel went with her to the ship but didnโt stop thinking about the past, in the time of cold in the year 1025, when he was still ten years old, his head started to reimagine everything 5 years ago, during the dark night.
In the southeast of the water continent, there was a small village near the shore in the middle of cold weather and white snow, all of the residents of this village were living a simple life.
It wasnโt a rich village, but there werenโt any shortages of necessities, this village was full of peace, happiness, and of course, music, though, it couldnโt maintain peace for long.
Gabrel was waiting for his father to come home from work, heโs used to not seeing his father before bedtime, after all, Gabrelโs father is the chief of the village.
Itโs the chiefโs responsibility to process all the villageโs matters, heโs doing his job honesty, thatโs why he canโt spend time with his family often.
Gabrel wanted to show him a surprise and see him before sleeping, he was practicing on his piano, in an attempt to learn his fatherโs favorite song, itโs normal for kids to show their parents what they can do.
โcra~ck.โ
A sound of an opening door was heard, Gabrelโs green eyes were sparkling because he already knows who came, it was his father.
Gabrelโs father, Elmos, who wasnโt expecting more than a routine day, started to hear fast footsteps on the wooden floor getting closer, only for his mouth to turn wide open from what he saw.
Elmos saw a small kid with long silver hair, a delightful smile, and unblinking excited eyes came out from behind the edge of the wall with a top speed.
โPapa~.โ
Gabrel jumped to his old man who is actually young, donโt ask me about this antibiosis, a father is his sonโs old man no matter how young is he.
Gabrelโs shortness couldnโt help him to reach higher than Elmosโs belly, though, Elmos helped by grabbing and holding him near his face.
โHey little Rel, I missed you.โ Said Elmos while looking at his sonโs smiling eyes.
โI missed you too, papa.โ
Elmos couldnโt help but giggle from his sonโs lovely voice, he got his son standing on the floor and asked him.
โWhy are you still awake? You missed your bedtime already.โ
โI learned how to play your favorite song on piano so I wanted to show you today before sleeping.โ
โWelcome home, dear.โ
A beautiful voice came out of the kitchen, it was Gabrelโs mother, a youthful woman with long emerald hair.
โIโm home, honey.โ
โDinner will be ready soon.โ
"Sniff Sniff, I can already tell how delicious it will be, however, why didnโt you tell him that I will come back early tomorrow? He could just sleep and wait until then.โ
โNo, I wanna show you now papa, now.โ
โSee dear? He was like that all day, I tried to convince him but he wonโt listen.โ
Elmos received this line with a long calm hmmm, he then nodded and moved his gaze to Rel with an attempt to make an angry serious daddy looking face.
โI will forgive you this time Rel, but you have to listen to your mother afterward, okay?โ
Elmos tried to scold Gabrel, and maybe he succeeded, you can even notice Gabrel struggling and trying to shift his face to prevent his laugh from leaking, Elmos noticed and got angry, because of that, he did what was unexpected, and attacked Gabrel.
โCome here you little brat!โ
He then swooped on Gabrel with rains of merciless tickles.
โN-noo โgigglesโ papa, s-stop please โgigglesโ.โ
Gabrel couldnโt endure, he fell and started to beg for his life, while Hala was organizing the plates of food on the table.
โThen let me hear the magic words.โ
โS-sorry โgigglesโ.โ
With his merciful heart, Elmos forgave his sonโs sins, Elmosโs wife, Hala, couldnโt do anything but draw a happy smile, Gabrel finally stopped laughing and looked at his father, Elmos looked back and said.
โYou said you wanna show me something, Rel.โ
โYes, I wanna show you how I can play your favorite song.โ
Elmos sat and said.
โThen show me what you got.โ
Gabrel nodded, he summoned his blue piano, left his two hands, and before his fingers touching the buttons โKnock Knockโ a sound came behind the door was heard.
โWhoโs visiting at this hour?โ Said Elmos with slanted eyebrows and a twisted mouth.
There was a soldier in front of the door, gasping while trying to talk, he mustโve come here in a rush.
The soldier wore full body armor, though, his face was clear as the sun of the morning, it appears that heโs still young, early 20โฒs maybe.
There wasnโt any special feature on his face, but the shadow of fear is obvious behind him, Elmos turned his face from annoyance to seriousness.
โWhat is it, soldier.โ
The soldier took a deep breath and unleashed what was trapped in his mouth.
โWe saw a naval fleet approaching our borders, sir, we think this is something worth your consideration.โ
โWhatโs the direction theyโre coming from?โ
โTheyโre coming from the northwest, sir, and heading to our direction.โ
โGot it, you go now, I will follow you.โ
โYes, sir.โ
The soldier left running as fast as he can, Elmos approached Hala and whispered.
โThey may be enemies, if the worse came to worst, I will send a warning message to you, run with Rel to the water main village through the tunnel after receiving my message.โ
He then looked at Gabrel with a calm smile to make him feel everything is ok.
โSorry Rel, I think you have to wait a little longer.โ
โO-ok, but come back home quickly, I want to show you what I can do, papa.โ Said Gabrel with a worried face, Elmos kneeled to his son and said.
โDonโt worry, Rel, I have faith in your potential, and I will come back as fast as I can to see it.โ
Elmos went up and threw his words towards Hala.
โDonโt worry, honey.โ
โBe careful.โ
Said Hala with sharp eyes, the corners of her mouth went down.









Great set up and lead into the next chapter. Some of the writing is a little awkward, but that can easily be fixed, the more one writes, the easier the flow! For instance the last sentence could use a comma after sharp eyes if it is happening a second after she sais be careful, if it happens at the same time, then you would replace the and with as and no comma. Like I said very minor..
only one other. when the father attempts to scold gabral I think canโt even notice instead of can