What is your opinion?
interesting read, excellent plot and creative storyline of a new world
"Very good first draft. Could use a little polishing, but one done has a great deal of potential for a great story. imaginative and interesting characters, and a bit of magic..."
A Journey for Revenge
"You can tell the author has put much work in the revision of the novel. It has improved a lot since the first time I read it and the overall flow of the novel is much better. Some parts were a little confusing. Mostly the fact that they are on a water continent? I don't know what that means... Do they mean California or Antlantis that I should be invisioning? I had a hard time trying to identify the main issue as well because there was drama happening, but the main character couldn't stop thinking about fixing an event that happened years ago. The main character also described things and speaks like an experienced adult, but then the author says he is short, so he's a midget? Then I realized he was a child haha but it took me some time to figure it out and it kind of distracted me from the drama happening in the novel. There are some distracting grammatical errors in the novel that could use some ironing out, but overall it is improving! I really enjoy the idea and creativity behind it and I can't wait to see the idea work!"
