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lovely story

"I got to admit, I was a little skeptic starting this story. I'm usually not one to choose fantasy over other genres. But this story managed to changed my perspective. I enjoyed the writing style and loved the head hopping. It allows the reader to see things from different perspectives and get to know the characters better. Just a little side note: when you change the point of view, I would suggest mentioning who's speaking before starting the chapter as it sometimes got a little bit confusing. But other than that, a good read! Cant wait to read more!"

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I like it

"The plot is really good and the author's writing style is interesting, makes it easy to imagine the scenery. The prolong could need editing as it's confusing by the sudden change of p.o.v's"

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