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Terrific!

Amazing collection of poems. Each poem holds a certain deeper meaning to them that grabs the reader’s attention. The subjects you chose to write about were compelling and the way you used metaphors throughout the poems was magnificent.

You managed to put so much color in each piece of work. It compelled me to click to the next chapter, each time being ecstatic as the poems only got better. I look forward reading more from you!

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Powerful

What makes this series of poems amazing is the raw emotions you put into it. You chose to use your personal experiences and converted them into a powerful message. One that we all either can relate to or can learn from. It’s a wonderful thing to do so keep up the good work!

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Brilliant concept

I loved the concept of this story. Writing from a cat’s perspective really grabbed my attention.

But I think the story could use some editing here and there. I think the story could be brought to a whole other level if you cut down on the details in some places such as the description of the attic. I didn’t find it necessary and it took a bit of the focus away from the underlying mystery and eerie undertone. I think it also would give more power to it.

Other than that a splendid story that just needs a little bit of tweaking!

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Unique story

I’d like to start of saying I found it interesting you opted for a more ominous protagonist. I like a good storytelling from a ‘villain’s’ point of view. It’s different from the usual flawed but moral characters and certainly isn’t everyone’s cup of tea.

However, my main issue was that the story lacked description of feelings. I get the ‘villain has no remorse or emotions’ act you want to portray but every character has a motive. A reason why they act a specific way. For example, she takes pleasure in seeing others in discomfort because of .... or she acts a certain way because of the way she grew up. What are her weak points? What’s her perspective on certain things? What does she think/feel? It makes the reader understand the protagonist beter and makes them more openminded.

You mentioned her mother dying and her never having a father figure, but you never explained the underlying emotions. What was her relationship with her mother? How did she react to her death? I can not emphasize how important background is for a character and its development throughout the story.

To be bluntly honest, that was a bit of a dealbreaker for me.

The story surely has potential but I also think it can improve on certain points. And by all means, I’m not a professional and not a perfect writer. But I like to be honest when it comes to reviewing. I always wish authors the best and want them to improve.

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Fushi no Reiyaku

I loved this story. It’s unique, compelling and leaves you craving more. The writing style was clear and the relationships between the characters was wel developed. I found the length of the chapters to be excellent and the story has great potential.

However, there were a few structural and punctuation errors throughout the story, nothing a good edit can fix. I’d also suggest only mentioning the pov when someone other than Tsuya is speaking. I didn’t think it was necessary since she’s the protagonist.

I’m interested in seeing where this is going and can’t wait to read more!

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lovely story

I got to admit, I was a little skeptic starting this story. I'm usually not one to choose fantasy over other genres. But this story managed to changed my perspective. I enjoyed the writing style and loved the head hopping.

It allows the reader to see things from different perspectives and get to know the characters better. Just a little side note: when you change the point of view, I would suggest mentioning who's speaking before starting the chapter as it sometimes got a little bit confusing.

But other than that, a good read! Cant wait to read more!

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Brilliant story!

First of all, I loved how you touched on a subject that is overlooked quite often.
You see the world through the eyes of someone less fortunate instead of opting for a vanilla character.
It's a fresh breath of air from a different perspective.
The way you described certain things were spot on, like the way how those living on the street got treated.

Absolutely loved the plot, brilliant how you described the whole aftermath.

I'm looking forward to reading more of your short stories!

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