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Moon Child

"This book was lovely, captivating, and spellbinding! I couldn't put it down! It kept me hooked from beginning to end! "

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Absolut herausragend

"Ich habe hier schon sehr sehr, viele Shifter Bücher gelesen. Jedoch ist dieses hier eines der Besten die ich bisher gelesen haben. Absolut zu empfehlen! Absolut gut geschrieben...spannend, fesselnd...einfach alles um es nicht mehr aus der Hand zu legen."

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Very good

"It was a bit too brutal towards women for me but overall the plot was really good great character base and good read soo gave it 5stars still 😊"

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Fantastic story!

"Emotional but sweet. Great read"

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Moon child

"Great story, well written "

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Loved this!

"You are an amazing writer. Great characters. I really loved your book and wish you well in your future writings. Can’t wait to read your next one!"

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Moon child

"Loved the story very much"

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Moon child

"Loved this book. I happened across it and didn’t realize it was a complete story. That was a bonus. Good writing. Thank you"

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Loved it ♥️

"Perfect .... kept me hooked ♥️"

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Lovely book, thank you author

"Firstly, all the characters are so well done, the vulnerability of Dawn in front of Kane was so well done it really made me emotional. Thank you for such a sweet lovely story "

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Suspenseful

"Inspiring over coming story. Healthy healing from heartbreak. Touching tale of treachery and trust building. Great job. Hoping for a sequel or a follow-up. Thank you for sharing."

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Wow

"Wonderful story. "

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Moon child

"I loved your story I was written so well, I can't wait to read another one of yours.ypu are very talented, thank you💕"

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Pretty Good

"It was a good story. But sadly I found myself just not really caring for basically the whole cast of characters. I honestly forgot who half of them were, the only ones I "cared" about were the main characters; Dawn, Kane, and Hazel. And the ending wasn't exactly clear on what happened to the bad guy. A simple throwaway line would have been nice but overall it was a pretty decent read. I think I caught about two grammatical errors but nothing I couldn't overlook and understand what was being said."

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Amazing story ❤️

"What a great story! I loved every minute of it...it was hard to put it down! Thank you so much!"

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Tracey

"Wow thank you for a amazing story I’m a sucker for a happy ending 🥰"

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Beautiful 🥺❤️

"Loved it from start to finish. Beautiful story I loved that their love wasn't the usual toxic asshole alpha love. Sublime writing. Recommend to anyone, story wasnt too long and didn't drag . "

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Moon child

"Really enjoyed well done thank you much for a great story "

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Very well developed

"One of the first stories I have read that shows the real feelings of someone who has been abused. Usually stories tell of this horrible abuse but the victims never have to recover from it they are just immediately alright after and even during their abuse. I commend the writers for making the character and her struggle more realistic. I gave the story so much more depth."

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Dawn and Kane

"Very well written!"

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