What is your opinion?
Hiraeth Review
"This book is really interesting. I loved everything from the summary to the ending of the second chapter! The summary was really engaging and had me hooked. The only thing that caught me a bit off-guard was the use of second-person point-of-view. If you are familiar with it, then it's not that confusing, but many on Inkitt are used to reading first-person and third-person-- just a tip! Also on a whole paragraph, you missed some quotation marks and it looked like it was the thoughts, when it probably should have been speech. But overall, this book is amazing and I cannot wait for further updates! -Ashu."
Interesting
"I really like how you have started your story, I will admit I did get confused through out the Chapter as it was so mixed with speech I had no idea who was actually talking especially the last part, I had to read it a few time for it to make sense, and I hope I am right that 'Will' is her friend? I feel like you have a good start and will end up being a great read as you get more chapters out, I am adding it to my library so I can continue to read and see where this goes! :) Nice work!"
