What is your opinion?
Breath of Fresh Air!
"Loving the story, it is unique. We all are so focused on vampire and werewolf stories of supernatural that having Elves is a breath of fresh air, honestly. Dont give up on the story author! It is really fresh and new on inkitt! Keep up the good work ♥️"
Review
"Hi love your story!! The plot is actually great (but of course it can still be improved) so keep going on! Saw your comment on the chat and don’t give up!! I sometimes really want to give up too but sometimes stories just fix themselves up. A tip would be to leave your story for a while and then come back to fix it!! Just a few problems with your story: 1) the grammar punctuation etc but that’s honestly not a big deal!! 2) is there’s this part in your prologue where you say “i am...” try not to do it because it feels forced (like an info dump)! That’s all good luck on your novel!! And if you could please check out my novel Hiraeth too? Thanks!!!xoxo"
