Two Sides of the Same Coin Review

"After reading the summary, I was hooked. It really left me hanging and I was dying to see what this book was about! Starting off, the summary is very brief. Yes, while it left me hanging, there were no characters mentioned and the plot or the idea of the book wasn't clearly mentioned there. There are a few grammatical errors through the six chapters that I have been uploaded so far. Some sentences are fragments and there are a few technical grammar errors as well. As you keep writing, it will come. But before you press submit, check if your sentences are complete, if there are any grammatical or spelling errors. If you aren't sure, check online or ask someone to edit for you! I would be happy to do that for you! Some chapters ended not making any sense like the first or second chapter. When the following chapter began, it sounded like it was continuing off from the previous chapter, but it wasn't clear. My advice for this common problem may sound simple, but it really helps. Some things are taught from young age and they are used throughout writing many times like the setting of the chapter or the story. Make it known to your readers where your characters are. Speaking of characters, I am still unsure of what the main character's name is. Add some details! What does he/she look like? What does he/she like to do? How would he/she act in a certain situation? Give your character personality! Writing can be hard and finding the inspiration to stay consistent can also be difficult, but as you get familiar with Inkitt, it will come. Fix up some of these errors, add some more details and 'juice' to your story, and this story has a lot of potential! Keep writing! Hope that helps! -Ashu."