What is your opinion?
Awesome!
"This is an awesome book! This story is great, and I have never really thought about the Anakin in childhood or about how Shmi Skywalkers life before. That is a great plot! Your writing style is awesome but could use some improvement. You could use a little bit of work on your punctuation and grammar, but other than those few things, this story is awesome!"
Good Job
"I very much enjoyed this story. You did a good job of staying true to the original story and your writing style made it very unique. You also did a good job of following the diary genre as you the way you wrote made it clear the events had already happened, and you provided enough details for the reader to get a whole picture without narrating like Shmi was everywhere. On the nit picker side, watch some of the grammar, punctuation and spelling. They were little things, like quotation marks where you didn't need them or a missing word, but they still disrupt the flow. Thanks for sharing, and once again good job :)"
