Try to not read it, I dare you!

"A interesting story about gang wars. Sort of like Romeo in one gang and Juliet in another. That is if Juliet was a badass and Romeo a smuggle prince ;) The narrative is from both points of views, which is interesting and compliments the story well. The writing style is chic, however the writer needs to develop it more. One thing that bothered me, I already expressed in the comments. The dialogue would be more easily read if each person got their own line. Author please check the comment in chapter 2 (I believe) for further explanation. Other than that I think this story has a lot of potential to develop as does the author to grow in her/his writing. Keep up the good work and I cannot wait to see where this story will take us :)"