The Awakening Loop
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The Awakening Loop

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Summary

The mind bending experience you have never seen before. This is a multiple part story about a person being trapped in a dream and his struggle to escape back to reality.

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

Chapter 1

1

I opened my eyes. Breathing heavily I found myself in what seems to be a hospital room. It's pitch black. I couldn’t tell if I'm laying down or standing up. All I knew was that I couldn’t see anything.

"What's this place? What happened to me?" I asked myself.

On the far end of the room I saw something. A small sharp object that is reflecting light. But where does that light come from?

"What is this place?" I keep asking myself, visibly annoyed.

"Do not move" a strong commanding voice tells me.

I couldn’t identify if it's male or female, if it's close or distant I didn't know anything. I tried to move myself closer to that mysterious object but every step I took it kept moving further away from me.

"What kind of sorcery is this?" I tried to figure it out.

"What is happening please someone tell me" I yelled at what seemed like nothing.

"I told you not to move'' the voice growled even angrier than the first time.

I tried to step forward but I was tied to the bed. My hands tightly hugging my body unable to move, and my legs locked in place. FROM HERE IS ADDED PART I decided it’s best to stay put. I had no idea who, or what was keeping me in there. I hoped it was all a dream, but my gut feeling was telling me something different.


2

I heard footsteps. The sound was getting louder and I was losing my mind. I was never more scared then at that moment, or at least I thought so.

“That’s it… I’m going to die. This is the end. That psycho will kill me for sure.” I explained to myself, hoping I’m wrong.

Footsteps were now really close. And then they stopped. In those 5 seconds of silence my whole life flashed before my eyes. Then a loud screeching sound, like the ones in old hospitals. The bright yellow light blinded me and I couldn’t see anything. It felt like the sun was just outside the room. I was too blind to see anything and too afraid to say anything. A minute has passed in complete silence and I opened my eyes. The size of the room overwhelmed me. All medical equipment that looked like 15th century torture devices on one end, on the other a huge mirror and directly in front of me a chair. Sitting in the chair was an older man, with a grey beard and hair that was as white as snow.

“He looked way too nice to be the one responsible for all this nonsense” I thought.

“Well, well, well. It’s so nice to see you in person. We’ll have a lot of fun, you and I.” said the mysterious old man reassuringly.

“I’ll leave you alone for a few hours, but when I come back I swear” He paused trying to find the right word “it will be once in a lifetime experience”

He then looked at the table on the left side of the room, inspecting it, looking at all the medical equipment with utmost attention. It was terrifying.

“I need to get out of there” I thought.

Then one thing caught my eye. The sharp reflecting object was not there.

“This is all too crazy for me.” I said to myself.

The old man soon left the room and his footsteps faded away.


NEXT PART COMES OUT ON MONDAY APRIL 6TH

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