Inkitt
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This man is alittle bit bipolar.

"He needs anger management "

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Torn up

"Fffff is a little bit more in a few minutes and then I have to go to the gym to get a hold of you the other night and I don’t know if I can get a hold of her and then she will have her send it to you the next day and then you have a good day to go to the house to get a hold of you the next time I go back and get the message that we can do to the next week I will have to go to get the money uuii"

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Great characters!

"I like the alternating characters. I like having both sides point of view. The story line keeps you guessing what's going to happen next. Thanks for writing this.!"

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Very interesting

"I like it a lot "

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Torn Up

"Enjoying it greatly. Came across lots of grammatical errors but the book is great so far. Can’t wait for the next update. "

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Torn up

"Very captivating love how the author tells the story from both sides. It keeps me intrigued. Very good read can't wait for more. "

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Twisted

"Good plot... Mysterious as well... Still curious as to what is going to happen next... Hope that title suots the story... "

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Honest truth

"I like the story I however hate the way it's narrated all the povs are in past it sounds more like a story in the past The story has few errors too ..the grammar but nevertheless it's an amazing plot and thank u for writing I love the characters "

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Hooked

"Interesting "

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