Enticing

"By far my favorite of the three poems I saw you have! I was almost singing it for myself! Though if I may suggest a few changes that will make it flow even better? 1st line make 'eye' 'eyes' as to rhyme with skies. 2nd line end it with a full stop 7th line "to see magic things"; make 'magic' 'magical' 9th line "tho dragon"; I can understand not using 'though' completed, so perhaps write tho with a ( ' ) at the end. That's all. Once again really well written, it really made me thought of wonders and of night!"