Very Intriguing Dynamic

"A little bit of Breaking Bad meets 24 or any counter-terrorist or police procedural show. Good job creating mood and slowly building the tension, but as I read so far it's a little difficult to tell if the story is teetering more towards an action thriller or a dark comedy. Some of the cliches like "one does not simply talk on the phone" or "Jesus Wept" seem a little redundant, and I'd definitely condense some of the descriptions, but so far it is a very entertaining piece and worth the read. Aside from condensing, the descriptions and establishment of mood are excellent, and the father's character is especially captivating. Cannot wait to see where the story goes from here. Fantastic job so far!"