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" So far I am pleased with how this book is shaping up. The author has a good handle on how to write a complex SIFI story. I await the finish of this story. Will it be a short story, or a novella, or a full novel. I await the next installment. Bill Lesburg"
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"It's hard to find online sci-fi stories that are different than Hunger Games, Maze Runner, or Divergent... But I have found one today and it's making me happy. This story was interesting from the very first sentence and I've found that it covers ground that not a lot of sci-fi stories do... The author is unique and fun, and the characters are very believable. This is a definite must read for any sci-fi lovers. Even though it's a first draft it's really good."
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"A good plot and overall good storyline. There are a lot of confusing brackets that are used that make you lose the story, If those were taken out, the story would be stronger, I also don't like leaving reviews unless the book is finished so that I can see how the story ends, I almost wish that you should have to complete a novel before it's posted on this site because sometimes authors take YEARS to finish it. (I'm not saying that this author will). But reading a story that is not complete is like watching a movie and turning it off halfway through the movie."
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"this is my first review so forgive me if I'm unable to grasp the words of that my thoughts bring to me. I really enjoyed this book , and I can't wait to read the rest of it. It is very enjoyable to have all these questions floating around, th e who are they? what will she do? how will this play out? I really can't wait for the rest. "