What is your opinion?
"Blue Butterfly of Death"
"Shinigami, you are a very creative writer, original in concept and presentation.........the mixed languages, which I understand why you used English and Japanese, was still a bit confusing.......however, your end result was evident, well described, bringing a good story to a close...........I suggest you work on the writing skills,ie; punctuation and Grammar. As a story writer, you are doing just fine. Continue and give the world your best works.......as I know you will.............. william elliott at https://www.inkitt.com/stories/fantasy/185550 please review my Book, Dead or Alive which is an abstract written approach to death, life and the reality of Both............thank you......"
Needs Improvements
"Hello! The title of your story caught my attention, but I didn't realized that it was a Naruto fanfic. Fortunately, I am familiar with it. Well, firstly, please use the proper Japanese if you want to use it. As a Japanese teacher, I knew the lines you had written in Japanese were most likely to be translated with Google. Both the grammar and word-choice were wrong. For the idea, I think it's interesting to describe the birth (or rebirth) of someone. I actually like your opening, though you might be able to improve the paragraphs and formatting. You can always discuss with the community here. Regards, Kei Angelus"
