What is your opinion?
The Deal
"I loved loved loved this story!! Not my usual to read, but still loved it nonetheless, especially the ending! What happens when a witch makes a deal with an incubus? Find out if you dare... I will say it's a great story with a surprise ending, but you'd have to read it to find out!"
Wonderful story
"I had coincidentally stumbled upon this book , but hell I am glad that I did. It was too good. Beautifully written."
AMAZING !!!!
"this book is so addicting! i’ve read it like 3 times already and will be back again 🖤"
I really appreciate it.
"Everything was great. You just did a great job 👏. Looking forward for more. Keep up the good work. "
The Deal
"I loved this book. It isn’t your typical erotica book. It’s Plot and characters are well done and I am obsessed with the story. I recommend it to anyone who is okay with a spicy story. "
Amazing and mind blowing 😍😍😍
"I came across the book by accident and it was well written right from start to finish. Good story that has you hooked and that you can’t put your phone down."
The Deal
"Petition to add special chapters🖐️"
The deal
"I love it could not stop reading lol "
The deal
"I like everything in here. It's been soo long since I got hooked like this to an online story. Everything is described in a way I can feel it. Thank you sooo much for writing such a good book!!!!"
The Deal
"Wow! This might just be my new favourite book. Why isn’t it published?"
The Deal
"Wonderful story!! Love love it. I wanted more but it was amazing!!!"
Praise
"Beautiful writing talent, you have!!! I so loved this story, you captivated me!!! Thank you!!!"
The Deal
"The Deal was quite an interesting book to read. I cannot wait for the final outcome."
I loved this story!!
"Loved it!! The characters are really relatable and easy to love, really liked their one hope you have a sequel ❤️"
Wowww!
"Definitely one of my favorite novels. I love the twist. "
Wonderful and sweet Story 😍😍😍
"Gosh!! I am speechless 😭 This will be one of my favorite books in Inkitt . Thank you so much for your amazing story, Author 😭😭🙏🙏🙏 Much love ❤❤❤🌹🌹🌹"
The Deal by Teddy
"I actually ALMOST stopped reading this story. The heroine was about to die leaving the hero eternally devastated and heartbroken 💔. But, I finished an I am so glad that I did. I loved the raw emotions and passion. I could almost feel all of the love, fear, heartbreak and joy of the characters. I truly enjoyed this story. "
One hell of a ride
"So I first read The Deal when it was just a short story in a collection but already, there was so much element in there that I knew could be expanded into a much larger, much grander plot. The short story in itself was great, as I praised so in the comments, still I couldn’t help but prod the author to consider make it into a book (though I wouldn’t much less call my aggressive, “This should be a novel!” a simple prodding *laughs*), and boy, it was so worth it. Seeing the character develop deeper into the story and knowing their history and origins made so much sense, a better look at them from the short story they came from. The settings were described well, especially hell. The readers could truly visualize the environment which helps a lot in imagining the story. The pacing was good and the plot was fully realized from beginning to end that one wouldn’t have thought of the novel coming from a short story. The descriptive sex scenes are hot, one is as spicy and exciting as the one before it and the characters really did connect with each other emotionally and not just having sex for the sake of having a sex scene since this novel is an erotic one. There is purpose to each sex scene that they don’t feel boring like in other novels which only seem to contain nothing but superficial sex scenes in every chapter with no actual emotion nor plot. Missing plots, I could forgive but the loss of connection between the characters just don’t do it for me. All in all, I really enjoyed this novel, having had the opportunity to watch it come to life from being a short story to actually becoming a solid book, and I’m thankful for the author for creating such a wonderful story for us readers taking upon consideration, like I said, our request. I hope the author’s novels would be published as books because even as drafts, perhaps being unedited even, the novels don’t need that much work, to be honest. The plots are solid, characters fully developed, and the three parts from beginning to climax to conclusion are all strewn together perfectly. This author deserves more for these original works and I’m expecting a lot more amazing projects coming up this year. Happy New Year to the author and to everyone else! (Reviewed: January 2, 2021 by Mary Alice Éclair)"
Loved it
"Loved this story. Lots of twists and turns. A few things that I was left questioning - why his eyes changed, how he was able yo turn human. But overall it was a good story, well written and engaging "
The Deal
"Thoroughly enjoyed it- so much so that I wish it had been twice as long! But brilliant writing."
