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What is your opinion?
The Crusader
"I would like to start off by saying that the title of this story is so compelling! I would definitely be looking forward to more chapters. This was a captivating page-turner no readers would want to miss. Lovely!"
A fun fantasy read!
"Definitely had fun reading this one! You set a foundation for a page-turning story, and I especially enjoyed the introduction of the main characters and their dialogue. That said, I would definitely work a little more on character development and try not to focus TOO much on dialogue, but overall a great job! Happy writing!"
