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LOVED IT!

"Bro this arc was wild 😭 Lumina sneaking in as Sebastien, Arwyn dropping that secret weapon warning and then Dex’s sacrifice?? Peak storytelling fr."

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Pyre Academy

"I Loved this story!! I couldn’t stop reading it. I can’t wait to read the next one!!"

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Nice

"Amazing story, with a lot of things happening, with some questions getting appropriate answers and many new questions appearing. I found myself sometimes lost between the different side stories that keep on appearing, maybe the transitions are two fast, it would be probably better to have the side stories in different chapters, instead of being, sometimes, only one or two paragraphs."

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Pyre academy

"Not my style book, but I enjoyed it."

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