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Promise

"Nicely written. "

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Honest review

"I want hard copy of this book to keep in my book collection. So nicely written."

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Astonishing

"The writing was captivating. The characters are very well written and they were believable. A connection is made while reading the story. The story had so many twists and turns. I literally couldn't stop myself from reading the book. Your writing is amazing. Best of luck with your future. Hope you write such more amazing stories."

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I loved the book

"Especially the characters. Each one best at their own skill set. Alex and Ashwa are heartthrobs. Ashwa won my heart. Definitely read once! Nice work Author!"

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Fantastic

"I loved the book totally! Thanks for such a wonderful piece of work. I loved the character of ashwamedha the most."

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Bokk5

"Good book, hope they have a happy ending Alexander has had no luck in life so hopefully it all turns out good xx"

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AWESOME

"Really awesome story grt plot though there are lots of grammatical mistakes if we ignore them then the plot is really good. It has the capacity to bind the readers.. Ashwa's love was like icing on the cake.. It was soo pure the perfect definition of true love really loved and adored his character.. The fierceness of Bella's character was amazing. She was a hell of a badass girl totally loved her attitude.... The wedding vows of Alex totally won my heart. They were so beautiful and u can feel the truth in themm.... Totally nailed it.... "

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Very intense

"Nice writing. Very strong and powerful characters. Well done"

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Awesome book. You're an amazing writer.. Keep up your amazing with

"Too good.."

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Amazing

"Absolutely loved the story.. The chemistry b/w Alex and Bella is awesome. 🥰"

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Fantastic piece of work

"I truely enjoyed everything about this book that I read it again ☺️"

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When sky falls

"This was much longer than any of the books i had read before,it had its moments,ups and down but i would just that it was just mind blowing and amazing overall,and srsly,the way you constructed the plot was great,nailed it tbh,wish you best of luck for the future"

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Promise

"Great story, well written, good plot, intervened with love, betrayal, secrets, all that can keep you interested and reluctant to put it aside until finished."

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Amazing

"Loved d whole story couldn't keep down d book... Read it in one go... Loved d plot. N characters... Bt I must say Ashwa ws left alone.. smthng u must write abt him... Story line ws amazing 🙌."

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Simply brilliant

"The suspense grips you and its difficult to hold on for the coming chapters. The writer has shown proficiency in thriller-love stiry genre. Its amazing. Keep it up."

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Promise

"I would recommend this book to any young adult, even the ladies in my church. Nothing l disliked about the book, l liked the chapter when Alex was declaring his last be for Bella. I like the way you write and your creative mind. "

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Promise

"This book is simply amazing...the plot, the twists, the drama is exhilarating.Its well written and no grammatical errors. I would recommend this book to anyone because it evokes so many emotions. I LOVE IT❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️"

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Double Plus Good

"YOU. ARE. THE. DEAD. Oh my God. I got the chills so many times toward the end of this chapter. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected. Or in Newspeak "Double Plus Good." Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried."

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Promise

"I love this story. I love Isabella's character and how strong she is. I also like Alexander's character but i didn't like how he treated Bella after the recent events. I hope Alex realizes his mistake and apologize to her before it's too late [ before Ashwa gets her and leave lol ]. Johnathan is a good character, very suportive and a little firm if needed. I can't wait for when Martin tells Alex everything, and i also can't wait to see what will happen to Aslan and James. The author displays the action scenes pretty good. I hope the couple will be back together. Love to the author for writing this amazing story."

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Nice story

"Awesome story!! Thank you for writing this.I absolutely loved it. Every character is superb.its filled with lots of emotion.keep it up❣️"

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