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Beautiful work

"This work is heart warming and brought tears to my eyes. I love the way you built their love story so that the reader would become invested in them as a couple. It is so rare these days to see the kind of love that your characters had. I absolutely recommend everyone to read it. Well done. "

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Heart wrenching, but so Good!

"I absolutely LOVED how you tuned into everything that’s going on right now in this short story. It almost made me wonder if you, as the author, had lost someone like this because it was just THAT descriptive. It’s heartbreaking and so sad, but you got the message along brilliantly. Very well done for a short story and if you did more I would definitely read❤️👍 Very, very few mistakes. So just revise till it’s perfect, but remember the amount is very small. Well done!"

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Hold on till April

"Thank you for this masterpiece, Lywellyn Saha. I enjoyed the short story from cover to cover. I liked the breath-taking, catchy and intriguing plot you set, The different twists and turns the story took make it awesome and outstanding. The extreme love portrayed in this short story plunges us into a beautiful realm. Charles' and Buchi's love story is just magnificent and very emotioal. I equally appreciated the subtle but very much clear transposition you made of the current sanitary crisis hitting mankind. More power to your elbow! I am sure you still have a lot in store for us. Look forward to reading other interesting stuff from you."

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Good and so sad

"This book is so sad guys, the author’s has the good ability to just describe and map everything out so perfectly you could just envision it; the couple dancing, the room, the love and happiness. I love everything about this book. The writing style and skills are just on point. I totally love it. The story line is something that some people are experiencing out there and it is just so sad."

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