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Broken Pieces

"(I'm just a little confused -Was Dove born to her parents or adopted.) The protagonist is going through the bitter side of life and the way she pens down her story is breathtaking...its simply beautiful. Life is like that. If it was simple and loving we surely would not have valued it. Challenges come and it is upto us to take them as lessons or disasters. This journey teaches us a lot. The author has made this so engaging and I really like it, the flow of words filled with emotions are just awesome. Don't stop writing.................. (Written after the first 8 chapters)"

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"This is an amazing story. I'll write a bit more when I see how it unfolds. I really can't wait to see what happened to her... Dove Santiago, a beautiful name I must say. Well done so far. Really nice😃"

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Nice Novel

"It's pretty interesting and the cover is really eye-catching. I love the idea behind the story but it seems like there's more to what the story says. Can't wait for it to unfold. "

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Pure Agony

"This novel began with Dove Santiago soliloquizing but urned into her autobiography. It was well-executed in my own thoughts. I think that you transposed her initial agonizing words about 'life' into something else... Something more magical and the best part was that you left no hiccups. I like that. Try maintaining the beautiful story you have in mind and this could be the next bestseller! Well done so far! "

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Broken Pieces

"Can wait to know what happens to Dove Santiago... Keep the story coming brother?! 🙂"

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