Emuchay

Michigan

Just turned 17 Don't grow up too fast Waiting for College Sorta Wrote my 1st book at 8 Love fashion, music and acting But will study Medicine I love New York My life's complicated

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An Inspiring one

I must say that this is like the best book I've come across here on Inkitt.

I love everything about it. I particularly enjoyed the introduction. The book is in fact better than I thought. No other review could actually say how nice the book was.

I love your use of Latin. It makes it more you know, exciting. It's what I think of whenever the word "imagination" is mentioned. I love your work.

I wish I too could write like you or even better (No offense). Your talent is just so beautiful but rare. Only very few authors can accomplish what you just did in about 59 pages. Great work my friend!

Stay safe and I wish you the very best of luck and if you ever publish it, we'll discuss it in my book club!
:) :) :) :) :) (: (: (: (: (:

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Chapter 1

I must say that I'm intrigued by your book. I remember when I wrote my first book. I was 8 or 9. In about ten pages of an exercise book, I scribbled out some words. As I was used to reading lots of picture books, I made a lot of drawings and colorings in the book. They were quite impressive for my age then.
The book was never published though but was a bestseller at home😃.

Why am I writing all these? I believe you have potentials as a writer but you need to work harder. Everyone makes mistakes sometimes that's why you should try hard to proofread your works first. I don't proofread so you may find some errors too but definitely very few.

To better your writing, you have to learn how to read more. Read other books. Read books relating to the genres you write on and you'll be sure to learn more. Watch movies too, it'll help a lot to improve your vocabulary.

Maximise your opportunity now you can and I promise you that you'll succeed. Always put in your best and make sure you're satisfied with your work first! Your story was good. Very good but you need to proofread it. Continue writing because the plot can pardon that. You're doing just fine:)

Reach out to me whenever you want to:) For now, enjoy the rest your evening:)

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The Story Rocks!

I love everything. The story is so interesting. It's very relatable and well thought-out. I don't have much to say but as I read further, I'll update the review.

The book is so amazing, you should definitely ask more people to read. It's really engaging and fun to read. Each sentence was interesting to read.

I can't wait to see more updates! Stay safe my friend.

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I love the character development of the book!

Your writing is really nice. I love all the characters in the book and how you took time to make sure none was left behind.

Vanessa, the protagonist was so relatable that I started believing she was a real human being. I love

her parts in the book. The other characters worked well and fir into the book so well.

However, I must confess that there were some grammatical and punctuation errors but don't get alarmed, it's totally normal. I mean, we're all humans and I guess you typed it with your phone so it's totally common to find them in your book. Always proofread every once-in-a-while because you'll see some errors you never actually thought were there. I too proofread and when I do, I find shocking errors and I'd be like "What the!"

So all in all, you have a great story plot. Never stop writing and stay safe! :) :) :)

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Great, great, great!

I love this! I wish I could learn more from you to improve my poetry. Good luck my dear friend. This is a nice one!
Stay safe :)

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Just Good...

The book was well-planned and I admire how the author could add twists and turns in the story, it showed how much he knew he owned the book and could turn it into whatever he liked.

I might have very little experience with book reviewing but I must comment that it's a good book overall. He's definitely gifted. There were very little grammatical errors.

Keep up the good work!

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Broken Pieces

Can wait to know what happens to Dove Santiago... Keep the story coming brother?! 🙂

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The Transylvanian Kings

I've loved everything about the book so far. I just wish it could be completed soon. I would definitely read all the books in the series! I would recommend the book to any horror or humor reader because it is very hilarious. I love the character Amelia Robinson a lot! Even the Gothic Ghoul! I can't wait for more!

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