Inkitt
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I love It

"This is a amazing novel to read. I hope it gets more reads and stars!💛💛💛💛💛💛"

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nice!

"I'm loving the story so far but I did notice some typing errors in your story which is normal, if you fix those it will be perfect. I love the plot and the way you introduced the characters not failing to leave anything out. It gets better the more I read, keep it up!!"

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Love Story 1

"I have a feeling that this is going to be another epic love story! You've got me so absorbed. I can't wait for more updates. I'll definitely recommend it though it isn't yet complete. Keep up the good work! 💓"

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Love Story 1

"Okay there is something that this story points out to.....I mean the poverty faced by Ned and Roy, the discrimination faced by Maria and Winnie and also George-the depression he is going through which finally led to suicide. Discrimination and poverty are the two main evils in every known country. I don't care if the story is not romantic but I would like it more if the author pays major attention to these issues. These are the bitter truth of this world. "How I wish we lived in a time when laws were not necessary to safeguard us from discrimination." --Barbra Streisand Make this book create difference because one ideology leads to a big difference. Anyway this was a really good book and worth my time. <dude note its Ned and not Bed>"

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Wow

"I am loving this book so far.... pls update as soon as possible..... thanks"

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Love it so much

"Loved every word in the book so far. It's really interesting and addictive. I want more. Please update soon... "

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Chapters 1 and 2

"I love everything so far. I appreciate the descriptions and the plot and writing style. I have a feeling it'll unfold into a well-deserved book and is a potential bestseller! "

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