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Character POV

"It would be so much easier to tell his talking if you made a chapter of 1 person P.O.V"

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Feminine power

"I loved the book. Enjoyed the characters the storyline. A few Grammer mistakes but it was really good to read. I loved silvers character."

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Playing for keeps: book 2 jean and ink's daughter

"Wow...this was totally amazing and it was a fantastic story to read. I loved it."

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Playing for keeps book 2: jean and....

"Wow!! Loved it!! Awesome read!! Thank you for sharing your story with me"

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Did It Once Again

"This book shows the writing skills of this author... action, suspense, drama, romance and sex all skillfully woven into this book. Anticipating another great book as this one closes and the next one begins."

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Playing For Keeps: Book 2: Jean and ...

"I enjoy this story so much, but the end came so suddenly"

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Book

"I really like this book "

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Beautiful

"It is very good and interesting "

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Great book

"😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊"

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Good novel ♥️♥️

"It was amazing 😍😍 fantastic reading your novel ♥️♥️ and can't wait to read more of your novels ♥️♥️"

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Playing for Keeps Book 2

"Loved it! More"

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Jean and Ink's Daughter

"This one was much better than book 1 but still needs some editing and revisions done to it. Characters need to be described and identified when they are speaking."

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Playing for keeps: Jean& Ink's Daughter

"I love this story, I can't wait to read the next story on this."

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Very good book

"I love the story "

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Play for keeps

"I like the story "

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Storyline is getting better

"Maybe more quotation marks ans separation of paragraphs for each characters point of view :-)"

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Playing for keeps book 3

"I’m loving this story "

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Van Sittert

"I am enjoying this story so much I don't care that the spelling is not perfect or that I sometimes have to recreate the sentences due to incorrectly used words. Really a great story! "

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So good

"Loved this book so much.... Please keep the chapters coming"

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Review

"Very good story. Good strong characters. Plot was good and stayed on track. Some stories the plot meanders and gets lost. Some grammar and spelling errors that needed addressing "

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