Interesting Start

"I love this world you've created! This future dystopian-aftermath livelihood with a civilization struggling to regain prominence while still living in fear. I'm very intrigued as to where you go with this. I'm curious to know more about 71 and how powerful he is and how they were able to defeat him during The Fall. And what he can possibly do to threaten their existence. SO MANY QUESTIONS that need answers. But also, I'm a little confused about the point of view. Who are we following in this story? Is it a separate narrator or are we looking through the eyes of one of the civilians? Is it 68 or has it been 68 years or both? I'm a little confused by that but I'm sure it'll clear up in the next chapter. Good read and great start so far."